Sunday, April 6, 2008

Dear Mr.Paul, this is where you can post your comments on reading journals...

2 comments:

My P4 class said...

Cameron,

You posted some sound ideas. I wish you had used capital letters when needed. Just because this is done online, doesn't mean you should forget sentence structure and punctuation.

Mr. Paul

My P4 class said...

Cameron,

Along with others you explored and developed the point. Please be careful of punctuation. Lord Loss and Little Red Riding Hood need capitalising.